关于英国留学推荐信结尾的8个反面例子(3)

　　The first to arrive and the last to leave, she took pride in making sure that everything was in order and well maintained.

　　7.为了表明被推荐人学习态度端正，推荐人喜欢在推荐信中举例说明：他总是坐在教室的第一排听讲。这也不见得就是一种美德。坐在后面的同学都是不努力的吗?

　　He would often sit within the first few rows, frequently raising questions and clarifying concepts that were unclear to him/I first became acquainted with Mr.Wang at my lecture, where he sat in the first row and impressed me with his full concentration and enthusiastic participation in class discussions

　　8. 为了说明被推荐人勤奋好学，推荐人经常在推荐信中写到这样的事实：被推荐人总是要求推荐人推荐一些相关的书籍，或是被推荐人向推荐人借书看。这样的事例太雷同了，缺乏独特性。

　　To broaden his intellectual horizons, he has often asked me to introduce books and journals for him to read. Actually, he had borrowed so many books from my personal collection that he left quite a large part of my bookcase empty.

　　以上就是中国留学生在英国留学推荐信结尾经常会犯的八个错误，如果之前的内容和结果都还写得不错，却在英国留学推荐信结尾犯错，整篇推荐信就是功亏一篑了。所以细节要至始至终。