英语写作提分的诀窍(3)

　　7、套用某些固定表达

　　· He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.

　　→ He was too tired to walk any farther.

　　他太累了，不能再往前走了。

　　· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.

　　→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.

　　这电影很有趣，学生和老师都很喜欢。

　　· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.

　　→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.

　　你的儿子已经长大，可以自己照顾自己了。

　　8、使用地道英语

　　· Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.

　　→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.

　　别担心，大胆试一试，你很快就会学会的。

　　· Thank you for playing with us.

　　→Thank you for sharing the time with us.

　　谢谢你陪我玩。

　　9、综合使用“高级”结构

　　· We had to stand there to catch the offender.

　　→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

　　我们所能做的只是站在那儿，设法抓住违章者。

　　· If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.

　　→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.

　　如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话，至少也不会比她老师的差。

　　10、引用名言警句点缀

　　在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章，不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧，而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。

　　· As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.

　　· There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.

　　· In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”