篇二：雅思翻译句子
翻译71：在一个消费社会里，人们不再满足生活必需品（bare necessities）。
错误的句子 ：in a throw-away society, people are not satisfied with bare necessities any more.
错误1：throw-away society 这个词伙不对。
错误2：not … any more 一般是形容量的东西，而no longer强调动作的持续。
正确的句子：in the consumer society, people are no longer satisfied with bare necessities.
翻译72：电脑对人的文化程度的影响随着年龄变化。
错误的句子 ：The impact on people's cultural level from computer, varies between ages. 错误1：cultural level 表达不对。
错误2：varies between ages表达不对。
错误3：the impact from the computer表达不对。
正确的句子：The impact of computers on literacy skills varies across ages.
句子结构：主语（impact）+不及物动词 （varies）；“of computers on literacy skills”都是定语
拓展的句子(使用并列句)： The impact of computers on literacy skills varies across ages and teachers have mixed feelings on the usage of computers.
中文翻译：电脑对人的文化程度的影响随着年龄变化，老师对电脑的用法有复杂的感情。
翻译73： 媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众。
错误的句子 ：Medias exaggerate the hurt of victims to attract public attentions. 错误1：Media本身就是复数。
错误2：hurt 是动词，OF前后要加名词。
错误3：attentions不可数名词。
正确的句子：The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering.
句子结构：主语（the media）+及物动词 (attracts)+宾语 (attention)；“by+ …”方式状语
拓展的句子：The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering, while ignore harmful consequences bring to them, such as their exposure to the public.
错误1： while是从属连词，后面不能直接加动词原形。
错误2 ignore和bring两个动词。
错误3 them指代不清楚
正确的句子：The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims’ suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as their exposure to the public. 中文翻译：媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众，而忽视对这些观众的有害结果，比如将他们在公众面前曝光。
翻译74：人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果。
错误的句子 ：Unhealthy lifestyle is the result of trend to rely on science and technology. 错误1：Unhealthy lifestyle 是可数名词，需要加冠词
错误2：“trend toward doing something”还有“tendency to do something”
正确的句子：People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology.
句子结构：
主语（unhealthy lifestyle）+系动词（is）+表语 （the result）; “of…”全是定语
拓展的句子：People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, because this makes their lives more convenience.
错误1：convenience是名词
错误2：because引导的原因状语从句不清晰，到底是解释unhealthy lifestyle，还是解释rely heavily on technology？
正确的句子：People’s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, despite the fact that technology has made their lives convenient and improved their lives significantly.
中文翻译：人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果，尽管事实上科技让他们的生活更加方便，给他们的生活带来很大提高。
翻译75：贫穷是社区犯罪上升的原因。
错误的句子 ：The reason which cause increasely number of community crimes in society is poverty.
错误1：reason which cause， 从句的主谓不一致，而且搭配不好
错误2：increasely number副词不能修饰名词
错误3：这个学生硬是把简单的事情罗嗦地说出来，很别扭。雅思考试考的是语言的通顺和地道，而不是考你的句子是否够复杂。
正确的句子： Poverty is responsible for the crime wave in many communities.
句子结构：主语（poverty）+系动词 （is）+表语(responsible)
拓展的句子： Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades, that means people's traveling will become more convenience and safety.
错误 1： 一般来说是 this means that
错误 2：become 是系动词，后面加形容词去修饰主语。
错误 3：safety 和前面 low –cost carriers 没什么联系。
正确的句子：Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an
astounding pace over the past decades, and this means that people are tempted to travel more frequently than before.
中文翻译：因为费用的下降，航空最近几十年发展得很快，这意味着人们会比以前更多旅游。
翻译76：因为费用的下降，航空最近几十年发展得很快。
错误的句子 ：The airline has sharp development in recent decades, with the cost decline. 错误1：in recent decades一般要用现在完成时态，这句话没有
错误2：“has sharp development”表达比较别扭
错误3：with是个介词，后面不能加句子
正确的句子：Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades.
句子结构：
主语（the aviation industry）+不及物动词(developed); “Because of low-cost carriers” 原因状语；“over the past decades”时间状语； “at an astounding pace”程度状语
翻译77：非法捕杀导致某些动物的灭亡，生物多样性也会损失。
错误的句子 ：Hunting illegally leads to the extinct of species, as well as, biodiversity is deteriorated.
错误1：extinct是个形容词
错误2：as well as 后面一般加名词，动名词，或者是比较状语从句的分句，很少加完整的句子。
正确的句子：Illegal hunting leads to extinction of some species and the loss of biodiversity. 主语（Illegal hunting）+及物动词（leads to）+宾语（extinction）
翻译78：动物实验有时候不能够检验出药物的不良副作用。
错误的句子 ：Animal experiment is occasionally unable to examine drugs side effects. 错误1：Animal experiment 可数名词，要加负数
错误2：occasionally意思是“偶尔地，极少地”
错误3：drugs side effects 没有使用所有格
正确的句子：Animal experiments fail to detect the undesirable side effects of drugs.
翻译79：电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分。
错误的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is a part of our efforts aiming at preserving the environment.
错误1：一般是“part of”
错误2：“effort to do something”更为通顺，在这里
正确的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the
environment.
句子结构：
主语（The invention of electric vehicles）+系动词（is）+表语 （part ）; “of…”全是定语
拓展的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the
environment, because electric vehicles do not conduct exhaust emission, compared with fossil fuel motors
错误1：electric vehicles重复
错误2：conduct exhaust emission搭配问题
错误3：fossil fuel motors用词不好，MOTOR是马达的意思。
正确的句子：The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the
environment because these vehicles create less exhaust fumes than conventional cars. 中文翻译：电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分，因为这些汽车比传统汽车产生较少的废气。
翻译80：有时候，很难去评估人类行为的环境代价。
错误的句子：Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental costs of people’s behaviors.
错误1：environmental cost在这里用单数就好，因为是在说整个影响，而不是不同的影响。
错误2：behaviour 英式拼写
错误3：behaviour在这里不用activities好，因为行为是指人的瞬间举动，activities一般是持续时间比较长。
正确的句子：Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities.
句子结构：
主语(it)+ 系动词（is）+表语 （difficult）；而“to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities”不定式充当形式主语。
拓展的句子：Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, there is a necessity for the government enacting legislations to restrict some behaviors , which can also arise people's concern about environmental degradation. 错误1：there is a necessity for 别扭
错误2：arise 不及物动词
错误3：状语从句后，再写那么长的定语从句就多余了
正确的句子：Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, it is necessary to enact laws to restrict some behaviours.
中文翻译：有时候，虽然很难去评估人类行为的环境代价，但是应该颁布法律以限制这些行为。
翻译81：人口老龄化促使国家去放松退休年龄的限制。
错误的句子：Compulsory retirement age will be abolished, and the reason is attributed to population aging and urban.
错误1：retirement age是可数名词
错误2：reason is attributed to 这个搭配不好
正确的句子：the ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
句子结构：主语(ageing population)+及物动词(prompt)+宾语(countries)+宾语补足语(to raise…)
拓展的`句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of skillful workers, a problem which has promote countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
错误：应该是skilled workers. Skillful表示人们做某事的时候所展示的技艺娴熟
正确的句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a problem which has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
注：a problem在这里是同位语，指代前面的shortage
中文翻译：人口老龄化导致高级技术工人的短缺，这个问题已经促使国家提高了法定退休年龄。
翻译82：学校应该允许老师强制捣蛋的小孩离开教室。
错误的句子：Schools should allow teachers to make the children with disruptive behaviours go out of classrooms.
错误：children with disruptive behaviours 略显罗嗦
正确的句子：Teachers should be permitted to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom.
原句：Schools should permit teachers to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom.
句子结构：主语（schools）+及物动词(permit)+宾语(teachers)+宾语补足语 (to use force…)
翻译83： 很多人觉得自己有必要赶时尚。
错误的句子：Many people think that they are necessary to chaes after fashion.
错误：人没有necessary这么一说； chase在这里用作及物动词比较好。
正确的句子：Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion.
句子结构：主语（many people）+及物动词(consider)+形式宾语(it)+宾语补足语 (necessary)； 真正的宾语是to follow fashion.
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