小学生介绍长城的英语作文(3)

　　长城英语作文(3)

　　The Great Wall has a history of over 2000 years ago, with more than 50000 kilometers, covering an area of the largest building in the history of mankind. The Great Wall is very grand. It west jiayuguan, the east side to the three customs, there are more than 6700 km, known as the "Great Wall". 8 walls average 7, 8 meters high, 7, 8 meters, can be 5 horses and riding. All of the Great Wall built with large stone and ChengZhuan. If the big stone and ChengZhuan connected, can a circle around the earth. The Great Wall not only grand, and beautiful. Majestic dragon through the jungle, the wall above the dotted with hundreds of thousands of tall beacon tower, is grand and steep, full of great artistic charm. The Great Wall shows the working people's wisdom and talent, is precious heritage in our country.

　　Teacher comment on: small author introduced us to the Great Wall of relevant knowledge, through reading the little author, and we learn about the history of the Great Wall, appearance and its place in history. The article vivid language describing, small expressed the author's praise of the Great Wall. "The east side to the three customs" instead of "east to shanhaiguan.

　　长城距今有2000多年的历史，总长50000多公里，是人类历史上占地面积最大的建筑。长城非常雄伟。它西起嘉峪关，东到三海关，全长有6700多公里，通称“万里长城”。城墙平均高7、8米，顶宽7、8米，可以5马并骑。万里长城全部都用大条石和城砖砌成的。如果把大条石和城砖连起来，就能绕地球一圈多。万里长城不但雄伟，而且美观。雄伟的巨龙穿行在丛林之中，城墙上面分布着成千上万座高大的烽火台，显得雄奇险峻充满巨大的艺术魅力。万里长城表现了劳动人民的智慧和才干，是我国宝贵的历史遗产。

　　名师点评：小作者给我们介绍了万里长城的有关知识，通过阅读小作者的文章，我们了解到了长城的历史、外貌及其在历史上的地位。文章语言描写生动形象，表达了小作者对长城的赞美之情。“东到三海关”改为“东到山海关”。